Writing Cause and Effect Paragraphs

Here is the example of cause and effect paragraph :

Most Indonesia people are ignorant about the dangers of cigarette smoking, therefore, they smoke this stick actively everyday without considering the effect toward themselves. The most dangerous effect is that cigarette smoke pollutes the lungs. It will affect the lungs' elasticity to compress the air and simultaneously shortens the breath. The other fact of  the dangers of cigarette smoke is its residue on physical appearance because it makes the teeth have a misty color and the eyes red. Pregnant women must avoid smoking this item because it will poison their fetus. The following effects are also important to consider in order to be fit. When the cigarette's chemicals flow in the blood vessel, it will increase blood pressure and lead to heart attack. Worst, it is able to impulse nother diseases and organ disorder like chronic itchy skin redness, cancer, throat disorder etc. All happen because 5 organs (the lungs, the heart, the kidneys, the liver, and the pancreas) are connected each other. When the lungs have a disorder condition the it will affect the others. Considering those adverse effects of cigarette smoking, people must avoid it now and ever.